In many occasions, people have asked me what would my dream house look like. I never really thought about it, but after seeing pictures of an apartment in New York, I immediately said that it was my dream house.Well, apartment.First of all, it is in the center of the city, on the very top of the building. Thanks to that, it has the most beautiful view to New York. The thing I liked about it the most, was that it is placed on the whole floor, so I would have all that space to myself. Considering that, it has its own private lift. After exiting the lift, you would enter a spacious impressive hallway with a large glass windows. The walls are covered with beige wallpapers and whole bunch of pictures. A beautiful red sofa is put facing the window. The kitchen is totally spacious. It has a high tap-room with bar chairs, as well as a beautiful eating table, made of glass, and chairs covered with white leather. The living room has such a modern design. Wall to the outside is totally made
out of glass, which gives it a special look. There is a huge plasma TV on the other wall, and in every corner of the room you can find speakers, as a part of Home Theater system. In the center of the room, there is a sofa, where you can sit or lie down while watching TV.A beautiful fireplace is put in the room to make it look, and if needed, feel warm.The bedroom is made in a white-red combination. The walls and the floor are white, and the bed and the curtains, as well as some decorations are red, which gives the room that special touch. There are also doors that lead to the dressing room which has a lots of clothes, a place for shoes, a big mirror with lights and a table for make-up. And finally, the bathroom,which is huge. It has a bath tub and a shower. It is made in gold-white combination, and it looks kind of antique.That is pretty much it about my dream house. I just hope I will get to it one day.
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it must be an essay but it is a paragraph :)it has an introduction,body and conclusion.it is descriptive and good.we can imagine it while reading
YanıtlaSilI agree with seda to some extent :):)
YanıtlaSilthanks for your comments...see you at classroom..
YanıtlaSilDEAR UĞUR,
YanıtlaSilyour essay is very good and effective but has some mistakes firstly I want to say something about your title:))
it should be MY FAVOURITE HOUSE.
never really thought about it/I have never though..
on the very top of the building./on the top of..
The thing I liked about it the most/the thing I liked the most is..
a large glass windows/a large glass window.
which gives it a special look/which gives a special look.
which has a lots of clothes/a lot of clothes
you should write more about your conclusion.that is enough bye.
hi! uğur,
YanıtlaSilyour essay is good. you describe your house in your dream successfuly.But,of course, you have made several mistakes. I think you should be more careful.